The circular charts highlights the information about proportion of families spending money eating at home and restaurants from year 1970 to 2000 whereas,the line graph compares the data regarding eating habits
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 21, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: You should probably use 'highlight'.
Suggestion: highlight
The circular charts highlights the information about proportion of fam...
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Line 1, column 153, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , the
...staurants from year 1970 to 2000 whereas,the line graph compares the data regarding ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
regarding, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 0.0 7.0 0% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 33.7804878049 18% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 179.0 965.302439024 19% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 31.0 196.424390244 16% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77419354839 4.92477711251 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 2.35961106177 3.73543355544 63% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81367257901 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 28.0 106.607317073 26% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.903225806452 0.547539520022 165% => OK
syllable_count: 50.4 283.868780488 18% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 8.94146341463 11% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 43.030603864 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 179.0 112.824112599 159% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.0 22.9334400587 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 18.0 5.23603664747 344% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0912855844052 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0912855844052 0.103423049105 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0843802449381 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0912855844052 0.15604864568 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.2 13.2329268293 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 61.2550243902 65% => OK
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 10.3012195122 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.78 11.4140731707 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.8 8.06136585366 146% => OK
difficult_words: 13.0 40.7170731707 32% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 11.4329268293 144% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.0658536585 154% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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