Some employers want to be able to contact their staff at all times, even on holidays. Does this development have more advantages than disadvantages?
Many employees want their staff to work in even holidays also.Which has several advantages on the one side but also has some drawbacks too.
To begin with,in many companies and organisations the seniors or the managers contact their juniors or colleagues during off hours because in many professions it seems significant for employers to do be present whenever someone need help regarding job purpose.A prime instance, the nurses and doctors always ready to do their duty even in peak hours because of humanity to save someone's life,which increase their experience.Moreover the employees get paid for their over time work which led to enhance their profile and boost appraisals and promotion.
On the flipside,the people get tired of doing work of tgeir offices in off days so they usually like to ignore their company colleagues phone calls and inspite of that,they like to relax or emphasized to spend some quality time with their loved one's.As an example,the recent survey of the sunday times published a report on that the 75% of people who work for long period usually become tired and unable to concentrate in office next day.
In conclusion,it seems easy for hardworkers to do office work without taking single leave or breaks which has various advantages but we should also remember that doing work all the time led to the drawback of lack of confidence and concentration.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...nt their staff to work in even holidays also.Which has several advantages on the one...
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Suggestion: Which
...eir staff to work in even holidays also.Which has several advantages on the one side ...
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Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to regard' or 'regard'.
Suggestion: to regard; regard
...o be present whenever someone need help regarding job purpose.A prime instance, the nurse...
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Suggestion: Moreover,
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...lleagues phone calls and inspite of that,they like to relax or emphasized to spend so...
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...some quality time with their loved ones.As an example,the recent survey of the sun...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, regarding, so, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1160.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08771929825 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80316347258 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618421052632 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 360.0 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 57.0 20.2975951904 281% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 160.711698392 49.4020404114 325% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 290.0 106.682146367 272% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 57.0 20.7667163134 274% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.0 7.06120827912 241% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.136904552351 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090683388269 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562108375484 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.090683388269 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562108375484 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.0 13.0946893788 237% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 13.62 50.2224549098 27% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 11.3001002004 226% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.13 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.41 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.8 10.1190380762 245% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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