You are going to another country to study. You would like to do a part-time job while you are studying, so you want to ask a friend who lives there for some help.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
- give details of your study plans
- explain why you want to get a part-time job
- suggest how your friend could help you find a job
Dear Gowtham,
Hope this letter finds you well. I am writing this letter to inform you that I have been accepted to the Post-Graduation course in Marketing at Southern Illinois University, Carbandale lately.
Well I am fairly excited to move to new country and start my college. I have been provided with scholarship for my tuition fee, which is a big relief for me. At the same time I am really concerned about my daily expenses such as food, rent and others during the stay.
So I am thinking of doing part-time job which servers my purpose. This will help me in habituating to the new culture and place as well.
As you are staying in the same locality, it would be very handy for me if you can enquire in some of the stores around you for any active vacancies. I will much appreciate your help and hope to meet you soon.
Warm Regards,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 94, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...very handy for me if you can enquire in some of the stores around you for any active vacan...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 123, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...enquire in some of the stores around you for any active vacancies. I will much ap...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, well, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 700.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51612903226 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52059157617 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.658064516129 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.596830868 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.7777777778 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2222222222 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263670326058 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932921431392 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843983486786 0.0603063233224 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154513566983 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103945380981 0.0580467560999 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.64 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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