These days, everyone has a desire to be in update with current trend in the society. In order to fulfil their dream, people copy either in fashion clothes or final products from others which are very popular. I completely agree with this argue that there is no such tendency to do not copy one's fashion as well as consumer goods and in this essay i will support my opinion with examples.
Firstly, Life is so short that people have to enjoy each and every movement so that, they tend to follow new fashion in clothing, different hair styles. For instance, palazzos are the popular clothing in this modern period, the teenagers are showing keen interest on wearing those type of clothing. Although there is a xerox of the same product(dressing) or may be in making similar hair style of another person there is nothing problem to any person.
Another reason why i agree with copying of any popular items is that, if the final product contains more nutrition values or it contains high proteins then there is nothing to say it is copying something. For example, in recent years Maggi was banned due to plastic was mixed in that product and the supply was stopped but the company manager have proved that there is no such type of ingredient is present in maggi, this whole process was done in the perception of supreme court. now, maggi was selling throughout the world without any restrictions.
In conclusion, Although it is common belief that if there is any product is popular then it should be followed by many others. I believe it is the nature of each and every human being in the whole world. personally, i think it depends upon the mind set of the individual.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, so, then, well, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1378.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67118644068 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41936076704 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586440677966 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3836397223 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.833333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5833333333 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.91666666667 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219913096009 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069303081953 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601323310325 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123036657503 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0685347151243 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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