Your photograph has won the first prize in the photography competition.
This will be displayed in an exhibition. Write a letter inviting your friend at the exhibition and include:
1) What was the photograph about?
2) Where did you take it?
3) What prize have you won?
Dear Igor,
I hope the letter reaches you in the best of health. I am elated and couldn’t control my feelings and as such decided to inform you about a big achievement. Allow me to elaborate.
I am sure you are aware of my love towards photography. Even though, you have many a time cautioned me to take calculative risks but sometimes I go recklessly in pursuit of an excellent picture. But, you will be ecstatic to know that my habit of recklessness has paid off as my photo of a mother bison along with her newborn baby has been awarded the best photograph for 2018 Wildlife Photography Award and will be showcased in the Louvre Museum in November 2018. The organizers have given me a ticket extra to bring along anyone and I want you to come with me.
Further, I would like to inform you that it is a big feat for me as the first time ever in the history of these awards a photo taken on African Continent has won. Moreover, I would like to tell you that I had taken the picture at Kilimanjaro National Park in Tanzania in the summer of 2018.
I am aware that you would be desperately waiting to know the prize involved. However, you will be surprised to know that I will be awarded a trophy and certificate of appreciation.
I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Brad Jason
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 73, Rule ID: FIRST_TIME_EVER[1]
Message: Use simply 'first time'.
Suggestion: first time
...you that it is a big feat for me as the first time ever in the history of these awards a photo ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... hear from you soon. Yours sincerely, Brad Jason
^^^
Line 14, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...u soon. Yours sincerely, Brad Jason
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1075.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 241.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46058091286 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65781158048 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56846473029 0.622605031667 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 348.3 290.88556701 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.5786525631 44.8134815571 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.6923076923 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5384615385 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183126609486 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060950559217 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361073640786 0.0603063233224 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0878130552606 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398963819552 0.0580467560999 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.59 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.