Punishment to criminals in the form of prison, cash penalty is widely used around the world from ancient times. Many people have argued that young people must be punished in the same way as the adults are being punished. In my opinion, I do not agree with the above statement as same punishment to the young ones and adults will have terrible output.
The environment of the prison is horrible for the young ones, young ones are pretty immature and their minds are under construction at early stages of life, most of the young one commit crimes either they are forced to do or they do by accident. The decision of selecting what is right or what is wrong is insufficient in youngsters. Take an example, in most of the trafficking cases, the majority of the criminals are youngsters, drug addicted and orphan, punishing them with the same brutality is an injustice to them and this punishment at an early age will make them stubborn and resistant to the punishments of laws and regulations.
from another angle, the environment of jail is always been harsh for the youngster which in turn make them stronger to commit criminal activities and the prison environment may provide a good platform to them for making contacts and learn new tricks from the older generation. For an example, youngsters are premature in terms of mental development, can be approachable easily, keeping them with adults can deteriorate their minds, which results in to born of new criminals for the society.
In conclusion, punishment on the basis of age is a very critical issue for the law regulators and the society. Keeping all of them together in the same prison can have a detrimental effect and punishing the young ones in the same way adults are being punished will have negative output to the society by means of arousing new criminals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: From
...punishments of laws and regulations. from another angle, the environment of jail ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, so, in conclusion, in my opinion, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81847133758 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67966143744 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503184713376 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.0092757497 49.4020404114 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.3 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200241589718 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0863858595554 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0840745459504 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134606032793 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0879514134574 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.47 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.27 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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