You and your colleagues recently attended a foreign language training course organized by your company. Now you all want to do some more language training. Write a letter to your manager:
How you and your colleagues felt about the course; why you all want to do more language training; Suggest venue and time.
Dear Mr. John,
I am writing to request you if you could arrange more language training courses as previous one it could be helpful for us.
As you know, last week our company arranged a Korean language training course and it was successful because of my colleagues including me learned so much from this. What is more, our company mostly deal with Korean and Japanese customers so it was helpful to communicate with Korean customers.
Needless to say, to serve Japanese customer well, it is important to learn basic Japanese language. In addition, it would be beneficial for our business due to the number of Japanese customers are increasing.
Taking this into consideration, it is highly recommended to organize a special training from Monday to Friday at 5.30pm in the office conference hall. Moreover, we would be grateful if you could consider our needs and take appropriate actions.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Toma
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 15, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mr. John, I am writing to request you if you could...
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Line 9, column 46, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended organizing'.
Suggestion: recommended organizing
...g this into consideration, it is highly recommended to organize a special training from Monday to Frida...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, moreover, so, well, in addition, you know, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 819.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15094339623 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76989586239 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 248.4 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7775193791 44.8134815571 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.0 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 4.34317383033 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202173664507 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837477624423 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0739637902112 0.0603063233224 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102396158261 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731186747948 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 8.71597938144 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.