You have borrowed something from your friend, but it was damaged. Write a letter to your friend and say
- Apologize for damaging the product
- How was it damaged?
- What will you do about it?
Dear Rachel,
Hope you are doing well. I'm writing to apologize for spoiling your pen drive.
I know you've been asking me since last weak to return your pen drive. Unfortunately, I am afraid to say that it got damaged before two days by my silly mistake.
As you're aware that i had an assignment submission as well as I was preparing for our annual function in the college. It was all mess and unknowingly I had left your pen drive in the campus. The next day when i was searching for it, I found it on the playground. It was completely crashed and broken.
I am extremely sorry to create hassle for you. Don't you worry, I have ordered similar pen drive of San disk with 16 GB memory. Also, I've decided to help you fix all the lost data from the broken pen drive.
Hope you'll forgive me and accept my apologies. Looking forward to see you soon.
Best regards,
Jessica Ayri
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ear Rachel, Hope you are doing well. Im writing to apologize for spoiling your ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you've
... for spoiling your pen drive. I know youve been asking me since last weak to retur...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
...ore two days by my silly mistake. As youre aware that i had an assignment submissi...
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Line 7, column 21, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...y silly mistake. As youre aware that i had an assignment submission as well as...
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Line 7, column 210, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... drive in the campus. The next day when i was searching for it, I found it on the...
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Line 9, column 48, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
...tremely sorry to create hassle for you. Dont you worry, I have ordered similar pen d...
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Line 9, column 134, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...ve of San disk with 16 GB memory. Also, Ive decided to help you fix all the lost da...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
...data from the broken pen drive. Hope youll forgive me and accept my apologies. Loo...
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Line 11, column 64, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to seeing'.
Suggestion: to seeing
...nd accept my apologies. Looking forward to see you soon. Best regards, Jessica Ayr...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, well, as well as, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 730.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.4512195122 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3878472305 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.689024390244 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 225.0 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.5236245948 44.8134815571 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 52.1428571429 76.5299724578 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.7142857143 16.8248392259 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.21428571429 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274359725604 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855058314421 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460121233665 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14265649082 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.069094093561 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.4 8.37731958763 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.23 70.7449484536 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.35 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.