The world is changing as rapid as it can and so is human's life. Children nowadays are not ready yet to catch up the life pace and therefore, they prefer doing indoor activities instead of going outside.
We are living in the shift time of new technology transfer era. As a result, several public places as park, recreation area have been removed to serve the industrial projects, or either living demands. This incidentally leads to the lack of playing ground for children, force them to stay home and entertain with video games in order not to get bored.
Millennials, as in definition, is a word for people who born in 1980 or later, and is considered to be master in digital communication. Millennial children can make friends through Internet easily but in the end, they are all lack of social skills, which are the key factors for people to live. Moreover, spending too much time on the screen may damage children to their mental. They are not able to be creative and always in passive if a bad scenario comes in, compare to those who prefer doing outdoor activities, they can solve the issue much better.
Fortunately, several ideas have been sorted out to deal with this problem. Many language centers, schools open a "summer camp" course for children, with improving their interaction abilities is the main goal. In addition, many organizations raise event for dynamic students to volunteer. Last but not least, government encourage students to join outdoor activities more often, in a very wide range, from sports to arts.
In short, children have to balance their schedule for both indoors and outdoors activities. Being master in technology and also in social skill is an ideal goal for a person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 111, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, incidentally, may, moreover, so, therefore, in addition, in short, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92439862543 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64930847468 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635738831615 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5521849172 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5333333333 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249716859163 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0759404358232 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.058069635341 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131418021945 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0371824263244 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.