Caring For Children is very important for our society. therefore all mothers and fathers should take childcare training course. To what extent you agree or disagree?
Parenting is a very difficult job and it is of utmost important to perform this job assiduously. Since, children's are the future of a nation, therefore people have lot of aspirations from them. So, to make them a good human being it is very necessary to inculcate high moral values and ethics at their early age. As all of this is a part of child care, some people think that the child care training should be imperative for all mothers and fathers. In my opinion, I agree partially with this notion.
To embark on, nowadays nuclear families are more ubiquitous in our cities where both the parents are working. Hence, in such families raising a child is a very challenging task. Hence, in such cases both father and mother should be obliged to undergo such training as any one of them can take care single-handedly. Secondly, this training also helps parents to understand their child properly, which otherwise is not possible. Because, as these type of training are imparted by professionals, they educate people how to handle when a child cries, what are the sundry reasons of crying and if a child is crying for prolong time , then contact a doctor.
In case of joint families, there is a privilege that there are other members of family too that help in taking a good care of child. In these families, the elders helps a lot in upbringing of child. As elders are more experienced in such activities, they teach plenty of things to the parents of child in terms of taking care and supervision of child. Above all, there help is free of cost as child training people charge fees to train people.
To conlcude, I would like to reiterate my opinion that not all mothers and fathers should take such training. It is only helpful for people living in nuclear family and there is no elder for guidance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67084639498 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55654032581 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532915360502 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.7332905131 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.125 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9375 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3125 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255505414265 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796396778171 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619010495501 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168168091916 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543784171024 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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