Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter
explain the reasons for the noise
apologise for the noise
describe what action you will take
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing this letter to express regret for the distress that have you faced due to loud noises coming out from my home from past couple of days.
I would like to apprise you that, the loud sounds coming from my house were not created deliberately, these noise you heard was due to music played by my nephews at a very high volume. My sister and nephews have visited my house to spend their summer vacations. As I am in office, I was not aware of this issue, it only came into my cognizance after reading your letter.
I would like tell you I have made nephews understand that playing music loud and is not good for health as it disturbs everyone. To which they have affirmed positively and this will not repeat again. I again apologize for the inconvenience caused.
Thanking You
With regards
HS
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 187, Rule ID: REPEAT_AGAIN[1]
Message: Use simply 'repeat'.
Suggestion: repeat
...e affirmed positively and this will not repeat again. I again apologize for the inconvenienc...
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Line 12, column 3, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ed. Thanking You With regards HS
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 685.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 150.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56666666667 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31306434555 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653333333333 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 209.7 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.5800348972 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.625 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.25 4.34317383033 6% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158014056651 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0699975077976 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397941860695 0.0603063233224 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10889944743 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028236866489 0.0580467560999 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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