Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
1. Say why a driving licence is advantageous
2. recommend a driving school
3. give an extra guidance /tips
Dear Rohit,
Hope, you are fine. I am writing this letter in response to your letter in which you solicited advice from me regarding applying for driving licence.
Driving licence is a very important document for a person because it entitle a person to drive a vehicle legally on road. So, you can drive a vehicle on road without fear of getting fined by police. Apart from that it also serves as a photo identity proof and hence can be used where such type of verification is required.
Before filing application for licence, you should learn driving from a driving school that renders best service in your area. As far as I think, Sukhmani driving school is best in your are, one of my cousin learned from them and according to his testimony, they are best
After getting certificate from driving school, you can apply for licence. You will be required to pass a test there, so do not feel hesitate and follow the instruction, you will definitely pass the test.
All the best from my side.
Thanking you.
Yours truly,
Aman
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'entitles'?
Suggestion: entitles
...ortant document for a person because it entitle a person to drive a vehicle legally on ...
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Line 7, column 57, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to drive'.
Suggestion: to drive
...plication for licence, you should learn driving from a driving school that renders best...
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Line 7, column 92, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'renders the best'.
Suggestion: renders the best
...earn driving from a driving school that renders best service in your area. As far as I think...
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Line 7, column 271, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ccording to his testimony, they are best After getting certificate from driving s...
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Line 17, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Thanking you. Yours truly, Aman
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, regarding, so, apart from, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77472527473 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39931283686 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.7375142126 44.8134815571 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.1 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188890106571 0.216113520407 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076569653119 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0766626062658 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.097918791762 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705494689437 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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