Coin and paper money will soon be replaced by credit and debit card.Eventually, we will have cashless society which will be safer and more convenient to everyone.
Wealth consist not in having great possessions but in having few wants. Nevertheless, there are some issues which remains irrevocable and as complex as ever.For instance, the given topic asserts that which raises question whether which is considered to be a effective; paper bucks or credit cards? Through this essay , I shall the dimensions of the topic through examples and assertions and shape up my opinion by the end.
On one side there is a group of people who believe that plastic cards are convenient and safer. Tjey strengthen their view point by claiming that, these cards: credit card or debit card are fruitful to save a environment, because deforestation is the major cause to make a papers so, ultimately its diminish the burning issue of cutting trees. Moreover, it is a long lasting process because it never be destoy or money is saving entire the life. In adding to this, it might be helpful to eradicating the black money and crime rates because of online transactions.
Contary to this, it is believed by few that coins and paper money have a lot of advantages in our daily life. Firstly, the illiterate people such as grey hair masses used it easily because they think that it is easy to carry. Secondly, it might be supportive in a uncertainty sotuations when electronic gagdets or devices are not working. Furthermore , we can use coins in a small outlets. To exemplif, there is a possibility of using buck to purchase regular needs namely vegetables and fruits.
Nevertheless, weighing both the options,I believe that there is no single conclusion still, I take this an effective clap require the use of both hands So, having plastic and paper money have equal share in our daily activities according to the situation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, then, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93559322034 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72707735094 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613559322034 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.249388986 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6923076923 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218196969425 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681230721027 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444584872054 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117255098477 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369709610595 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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