The provided picture illustrates the entire development of a honey bee’s life.
The provided picture illustrates the entire development of a honey bee’s life.
A quick glance at the supplied diagram reveals that a complete life circle has five main stages, starting when the female adults lay one egg. It is also considerable that the whole life of a honey bee lasts from 34 to 36 days.
At the beginning, the females lay 1 or 2 eggs every 3 days. After 9 to 10 days, eggs hatch and come in peeling step. During this third phrase, the immature insects will grow up by shedding their skin 3 times. This process initially takes 5 days from the hatching stage, then 7 days later and again 9 days later.
At the following stage, young adults emerge after 30 or 31 days since the circle begins and take only 4 days becoming fully maturities. The life circle of honey bee then comes back to the first stage and repeats all over the time.
- It is the commonly believed that we ought to just focus on our own society’s issues because it is impossible to support all the needy 84
- Writing task 1: TABLE – Using phone 78
- Success in life comes from hard work and determination 73
- Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other while others think that people have become more independent Discuss both views and give your own opinion 56
- The given chart demonstrates the proportion of Australian men and women in six different age groups in terms of how often they did exercises in 2010. 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 712.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50632911392 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30310185631 2.65546596893 87% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 106.607317073 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.689873417722 0.547539520022 126% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.5940591209 43.030603864 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1111111111 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 5.23603664747 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275842380609 0.215688989381 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153674047847 0.103423049105 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.306946894737 0.0843802449381 364% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.30717512221 0.15604864568 197% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.403037213422 0.0819641961636 492% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.2329268293 65% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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