It is said that adulterated food is key reason behind deteriorated health of all ages how far you agree or disagree?
Blending of extra substance in food for increasing productivity is food adulteration. It is major problem responsible for break down of health of innocents to greezerhood . i , accord with the given description and will explain it in furthur lines.
To commence with, adulteration is of three kinds ;intentional unintentional and natural . in case of first type owners of food industries in order to increase productivity of food add preservatives and food colour which leads to various health problems . sugar adulteration is a paragon of this kind which is adulterated by adding chalk powder which becomes a reason of heart disease and lung disorder .
Moving further in unintentional adulteration ,sometimes wrong packaging and due to unhygienic conditions change in the taste of food occur such as in wheat which rise chronic disorders .
In the natural adulteration , two reasons are common; excessive use of fertiliser and wheat fungus which is causing stomach problems and ulcers .
eventually , it is clear that in many ways adulteration is responsible for deteriorated health of people which should not be done as those who are adulterating food are somehow also consuming it and extra cash earned by selling that food spend on health cures so it is better to produce healthy food and remain healthy .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1101.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 208.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29326923077 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11330042053 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.2015651185 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.333333333 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1111111111 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204601480838 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0790355026892 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480457726394 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108715502834 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477810898727 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.