The circular chart depicts show the main reasons of land degradation.illustrates tbe affected degrated land in three main causes of during in the year of 1990.it can be shows the percentum.
It can be seen that the causes of worldwide land degradation. It shows the causes affected three regions of the world during by 1990. It is a four types of degradation.it is a show the percentum. it is a three regions. North america ,europe and oceania It is a highest deforestation of europe (9.8)and the lower deforestation of north america. North america is not compairing the deforestation of europe and the oceania. Europe percentum is a very heigher percentum is 23%. oceania compare the europe of percentum. It a not big gap in the percentum.europe over cultivation is a very high. Oceenia is a very low over cultivation .overgrazing is a very high in the oveenia. North america percentum is a very low. and europe is a very higher percentum.
Overall , it is a evident that over grazing activity is the major cause of land degradation campare to the other threee main reasons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 730.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77124183007 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12566403807 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 74.0 106.607317073 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.483660130719 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 246.6 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 22.4926829268 49% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1385527515 43.030603864 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.1538461538 112.824112599 50% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 11.7692307692 22.9334400587 51% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 0.153846153846 5.23603664747 3% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 1.69756097561 707% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230420747622 0.215688989381 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100587644061 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105153575598 0.0843802449381 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166376510414 0.15604864568 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248617972975 0.0819641961636 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 13.2329268293 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.31 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 11.4140731707 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.79 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.4 10.9970731707 58% => Gunning_fog is low.
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.