The circular chart reveals the four main courses of land degradation and the tobular chart illustrates the different regions during the year of 1990. It shows the percentum.
It can be seen that the courses of world wide land degradation . It shows the causes affected three regions of the world during by 1990. It is a four types of causes of world wide land degradation deforestation 30% , over cultivation 28% , over grazing 35% , and total land degrated 7% of percentum.
Europe is a highest deforestation 9.8 of the four degradations and higher the over cultivation of europe 7.7 and a highest percentum in the europe . It is a very lower degorestation of the north america .
Overall, it is evident that over grazing activity is the major cause of land degradation compare to the other three main reasons.
- The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular uk school in 1981 ,1991 and 2001 61
- Nowadays people throw away old things and adapt new things. Do the disadvantages of throwaway society outweigh any possible economic advantages? 78
- The diagram shows the life cycle of the silkworm and stages in the productionof the silk cloth. 67
- The diagram shows the life cycle of the silkworm and stages in the productionof the silk cloth. 67
- The bar chart below shows the results of the survey conducted by a personnel department at a major company. The survey was carried out on 2 groups of workers: those aged from 18-30 ,and those aged 45-60, shows factors affecting their work performance. 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 524.0 965.302439024 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 109.0 196.424390244 55% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80733944954 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.231146315 3.73543355544 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93212440002 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 61.0 106.607317073 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559633027523 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 163.8 283.868780488 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.0077512394 43.030603864 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3333333333 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1666666667 22.9334400587 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.333333333333 5.23603664747 6% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 1.69756097561 825% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220594277929 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108193340645 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598508838642 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133935567365 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.06831768041 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.2329268293 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 40.7170731707 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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