The best ideas arise from a passionate interest in commonplace things.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The proverb "Try Try till you succeed" tells the efforts which one must take to achieve the goal. But sometimes to achieve the goal, we do not need just the hardwork of trying everytime, attempting but the passion to win. Everyone has some passion in their own life. That very passion is like a lifeboat which can lead your life in smoother way. By trying everytime, we generate our own boat but it need not lead to success since it has no passion in it. So, why am I stressing the work "Passion" ?
The word "Passion" increase the metabolism in our body. Work which is performed passionately leads to success because our heart accepts it, the brain formulates it and we do it. If we consider the most of the leaders of various organisations and check their biodata, we find that they became successful because they had passion in them. The passion is like the energy in the body. The best ideas arise if we are passionate about that thing. We need not trouble our mind for the ideas. The passionate soul just flows the ideas into blueprint. The famous scientists of mankind like Isaac Newton, Albert Einstein, and many others are the best examples to give in this context. They were passionate about their work. Great mathematician Ramanujan was very passionate about the algorithms and the number theory that even till his own last breath, he was playing on numbers. Even when he was ill and professor Hardy came to visit him, the smallest number "1729" which is the addition of two pairs of cubes was discovered. This could never be possible if Ramanujan had no passion about mathematics.
Passion is just like the lubricant in the gear cycle of our life. It motivates us by generating new ideas. But, I deny the fact that the ideas can be always "best" as the statement says. The passionate interest could lead to ideas which may not have future but can be worth the knowledge of interest. The best ideas can be generated in many ways. The apple which fell on Sir Isaac Netwon was very case which led to discovery of gravitational laws of physics. It wasn't the passion about the gravitation which Netwon had but just the coincidence of him resting below the tree.
So, the best ideas may arise from the passionate interest in commonplace things. I agree with fact that passion generate new ideas which can be at advantage for mankind but may not necessarily be best idea.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 19, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: Try
The proverb 'Try Try till you succeed' tells the effort...
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Line 5, column 358, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...st ideas can be generated in many ways. The apple which fell on Sir Isaac Netwon wa...
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Line 5, column 473, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wasn't
...ry of gravitational laws of physics. It wasnt the passion about the gravitation which...
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Line 7, column 194, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'be the best'.
Suggestion: be the best
...age for mankind but may not necessarily be best idea.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.4196629213 113% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2013.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 421.0 442.535393258 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78147268409 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78998121737 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 215.323595506 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.498812351544 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 704.065955056 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 6.24550561798 192% => OK
Article: 12.0 4.99550561798 240% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.2370786517 133% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1494066675 60.3974514979 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5555555556 118.986275619 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5925925926 23.4991977007 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.592592592593 5.21951772744 11% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 10.2758426966 185% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216849262851 0.243740707755 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615646052955 0.0831039109588 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604056282588 0.0758088955206 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15444448752 0.150359130593 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641240990415 0.0667264976115 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 14.1392134831 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 100.480337079 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.7820224719 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.