Dear sir or madam,
I am writing to highlight an issue that has been creating a big problem in my everyday functioning. Allow me to elaborate.
I am living in the adjacent building to your restaurant. I was elated to finally have a restro – bar in the vicinity. However, the feeling of happiness turned into a sorrow experience for me. Initially, everything was perfect, but after a span of 2 months everything took a turn and started creating annoyance in the area. I feel bad to state, but your restro – bar has been creating a lot of sound at the night time every day. The situation has reached the peaks as one cannot sleep with the soundproof windows installed.
Further, I feel the need to remind you that the area is solely a residential area and any type of commercial activity is prohibited. However, it is none of my prerogative. I want your management to act on the issue as soon as possible before the situation escalates.
I have been a good neighbour to your as well as for everyone in the neighbourhood. I would be constrained to take actions against your restaurant if you fail to comply with the norms of restaurant laws and lower the sound at night time.
I hope you will empathize with my situation and act accordingly.
Yours faithfully
Brad Jason
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 84, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...l as for everyone in the neighbourhood. I would be constrained to take actions ag...
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Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s and lower the sound at night time. I hope you will empathize with my situati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, finally, however, if, so, well, as for, i feel, mind you, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1064.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8503373308 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 127.690721649 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592105263158 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 331.2 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.4025462119 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.9333333333 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0860057888112 0.216113520407 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0227830176235 0.0766984524023 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323230089199 0.0603063233224 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0543101364749 0.12726935374 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254341807706 0.0580467560999 44% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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