You travelled on plane some days back and lost your bag.Though you filled your claim to 'Lost and Found Department',you have not received your bag yet.
In your letter:-
(1) write the details of incident
(2) inquire the status of your lost bag to airline
(3) tell what you want if the bag is not found
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to draw your attention towards my matter which is related with my lost bag.Actually,I lost my bag when I was traveling from Alberta to New Delhi by Kingfisher airline.
To commence with,it was an international trip and I had to go Alberta for business purpose but,on the day of departure,I was in hasty and owing to that,I lost my bag in the aeroplane.Moreover,when I reached my home back then I realized that my bag was not with me and because of that,I was in dilemma.Furthermore,I claimed to 'Lost and Found Department' and I gave them full description of my lost bag but,I had not received bag.
In addition,I would like to tell you that it was a black color bag with a single zipper but,some of my important documents were in it which were related with my business so it is high time,kindly find this bag promptly so that I can complete my pending work.Last but not least,you do not find my bag then you will have to give me possible compensation.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Thanking you for anticipation
Your faithfully,
XYZ
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, furthermore, look, moreover, so, then, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 911.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 194.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69587628866 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22840528767 2.54303337028 127% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577319587629 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 277.2 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 16.3608247423 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 153.888791015 44.8134815571 343% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 182.2 76.5299724578 238% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 38.8 16.8248392259 231% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.0 4.34317383033 299% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 2.54639175258 746% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287826363178 0.216113520407 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166253844056 0.0766984524023 217% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.056119594527 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144109431254 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585264780398 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 8.37731958763 240% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.83 70.7449484536 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 7.45979381443 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 8.62886597938 324% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.2 8.54432989691 201% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.