Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film starts, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? which other types of jobs should be highly paid?
Certain section of society perceives that the artists and athletes are overpaid. It is unanimously agreed that colossal amount of money is being given to people from this industry. Firstly, I will advocate my opinion by giving numerous reasons. Secondly, I will enlighten few other notable professions, which also need prompt consideration by giving reasonable remunerations.
To begin with, industries which are merely responsible for entertaining people are paid higher salaries. The intention behind this is very transparent and it is because that they completely deserve it. The profit which they are making is visible to everyone, but the hard work behind it is concealed. After putting in hard work of days and nights, they finally able to bring an outcome in front of people and they usually love it. For instance, Leonardo Dicaprio, who started his career from short films and after even reaching to the peak of his career, he was disregarded for the award many times. Eventually, he got it, but after putting in much more effort. Giant companies frequently choose celebrities for advertisement of their products and the reason is that because common people follow these celebrities. So the share of the profit is given to the brand ambassador of the product.
On the other hand, there are few very notable professions of the society, which are not even reasonably paid, but they are also underestimated. These professions are very imperative in the development of a society; unfortunately, they have been overlooked by most of the countries. As for further illustration, teachers are one of the most underpaid professions in every country. Moreover, doctors and engineers are likewise not paid enough money. This results in an unprecedented surge in the migration of these people.
All the above arguments fortify my perception that celebrities are given huge salaries, because they deserve it. Secondly, there are several other professions, which are important for prosperity of the nation, but regrettably, those people are not paid enough.
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- Some people feel that entertainers (e.g. film starts, pop musicians or sports stars) are paid too much money. Do you agree or disagree? which other types of jobs should be highly paid? 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, likewise, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, as for, for instance, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1736.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30886850153 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94072595575 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562691131498 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1055220007 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.3684210526 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2105263158 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.47368421053 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147226645974 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0451777810608 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565283037623 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0908790472128 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00673979541166 0.056905535591 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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