The diagrams below show how glass containers , such as bottles , are produced and recycled.
The first flow diagram depicts the information about how glass containers are produced while, the second diagram shows the recycling of used glass. It is clear and cohrent representation.
It can be seen that the first step in the glass production is mixing, in which sand, soda ash, limestone and other chemicals are mixed together. After, the mixture is stored in the glass furnace at higher temperature that is 1500°C and this process is known as melting. Afterthat, shaping is the process in which molten glass is shaped by blowing. Finally, products are produced; namely glass conatiners.
The collection of used glass is the first step of glass recycling. Then, the collected glass is sorted by according to its colour. For removing the impurties from the used glass, it has been washed. At the fourth stage of recycling, the glass is crushed and melted, and in the final stage it is moulded into new products
- The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001 78
- The three pie charts below show the changes in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981, 1991 and 2001 73
- Some people say that computer games are bad for children by all means other believe that these games are contributed to children development.the discuss both view and give your apinion 67
- Some people say that computer games are bad for children by all means other believe that these games are contributed to children development.the discuss both view and give your apinion 67
- The graph shows the demand for electricty in England during typical days in winter and summer. The pie charts shows how electricity is used in an average English home. 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, second, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 768.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95483870968 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59223205241 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.593548387097 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5612832582 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.8 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 22.9334400587 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240932419016 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0894578749598 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105377885988 0.0843802449381 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187374937462 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.121944976711 0.0819641961636 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.06136585366 114% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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