The bar chart below shows the result of survey conducted by a personnel department at a major company. The survey was carried out on two groups of workers: those aged from 18-30 and those aged 45-60, and show factor affecting

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The bar chart below shows the result of survey conducted by a personnel department at a major company. The survey was carried out on two groups of workers: those aged from 18-30 and those aged 45-60, and show factor affecting

The given histogram chart depicts the information about the results of survey, which is conducted among two different groups aged employees between 18-30 and 45-60 years it reveals the factor affecting their work perfomance. The data is calibrated in percentum.

It can be seen that the individuals who aged are between (18-30) years have maximum over 90% chance for personal development and(45-60) years aged have 40% whereas, the team spirit are same in both aged groups is near about 60% repectively.

On the other hand that the individuals who aged are between(18-30) years least 20% job security whereas, between(45-60) years is double than(18-30) years. Moreover the affect of money between the aged(18-30) and(45-60) is less than 80% .

Overall, it is evident that the least factor affect work perfomance in work environment and the highest in change of personal development.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, whereas, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 16.0 33.7804878049 47% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 738.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 139.0 196.424390244 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30935251799 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.43363162301 3.73543355544 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72969311275 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625899280576 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 205.2 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.8021974285 43.030603864 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 112.824112599 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.23603664747 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249851570303 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111157120118 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0962099483522 0.0843802449381 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148231695944 0.15604864568 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0860234895196 0.0819641961636 105% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.2329268293 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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