Some people think that governments should do more to make their citizens eat a healthy diet. Others believe that individuals must take responsibility for their own diet and health. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.
It is true that balanced diet is is of great necessary for growth psychologically and physically aspects. It is argued that responsibility of state in promoting a healthy diet for their inhabitants is dispensable part in strategies. However opponents contend that balanced diet is problem of individuals in their development. I am of opinion that involve of both personal and government bring own merits. In this essay, I will examine and analysis of personal and governmental perspective to support for my view.
On the one hand, it is commonly believed that national actions should be taken towards diet that gains more quality. It is understandable that since citizens possess a balanced diet that assists them in prompting more well-being, this is driving force in achieving social and economic attainments. One of the clearer examples for this fact is that Japanese was seemed as those is the shortest on the world in the past. From that view, japan government made decision in alternation of citizen’s diet by policies and proposals, that enables japan nation have average high becoming more improved after certain period of time. As a result, Japanese gain confidence and respect in communication, they focus on enhance their productivity and make contribution on massive prosperity of this countries. Another issues that deserve to mention is that when state take responsibility on meals daily basis, this means residents are is no longer to be worrying on occurrence of chemicals or toxic wastes in their diet. It is not unusual in these days that human has suffered variety of diseases related to inequality diet like cancer or poisoning. This makes lives become more anxiety and reduce in long span.
One the other hand, it is recognized that every individuals should assume their responsibility when their country have inadequate ability in meeting this demand. In the fact, in some disadvantaged countries, government need spend their budget on medical or education problems that is more essential. Therefore, citizens should place more attention on their meals to be a health individual in supporting nation gaining prosperous country in the years ahead. Secondly, individuals have various healthy demand and need to have different diet. Since they perceive this, they may equip themselves with own balanced diet that is appropriate of nutrients and financial condition. They are more independent and do not affect from state’s programs that is not suitable for some cases.
In conclusion, it seems to me that, balanced diet has increasingly importance in personal growth as well as whole society. I think that state play crucial role in creating health meals for their citizens, however individuals keep decisive part in order to meeting own demand but gain high effective.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 13.1623246493 190% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 7.30460921844 301% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 57.0 24.0651302605 237% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2358.0 1615.20841683 146% => OK
No of words: 446.0 315.596192385 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2869955157 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96228649284 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 242.0 176.041082164 137% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542600896861 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 742.5 506.74238477 147% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 5.43587174349 313% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0300907227 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.285714286 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2380952381 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7619047619 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398818581078 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107478487068 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483214050319 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241237005087 0.151304729494 159% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0571929272513 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.53 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 78.4519038076 175% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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