The luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals.
Developing into truly strong and independent individual depends on individual’s effort in his/her life and his/her goals that he/she has. Contemporary life has close relationship with technology to make world a better place to live and helps persons to reach their goals fast. People can use technologies in order to meet their demands at a short time.
People who live at developed countries would be able to develop their abilities and discover their talents faster than those who live at developing countries due to advanced technologies. Development technologies in their society provide them with the golden opportunity to spend most of their time on finding new methods for solving their problems. While, in contrast, people who are from developing countries, have to struggle with different kinds of rudimentary problems due to lack of advanced technologies. They have to waste their time on tackling cheap problems instead of focusing on main issues.
For instance, the most proportion of people who live at poor countries and are prevailed from advanced technologies like internet would not be able to develop their communications with other people from all over the world. They cannot get information from internet which will eventually lead to decreasing the level of their awareness. Lacking of availability of these kinds of technologies enforce people to involve with other cheap ways like gathering information by reading books and newspapers which is very time consuming. In addition, the rate of literacy at these poor countries is very slow and people would not be able to keep themselves up to date about recent science.
Convenience and luxuries of contemporary life also decrease expenditures and the amount of time for users and make contribution to improve independent individuals. For example, people can rely on several automatic machines during their live without relying on other people and little by little they feel that are independence. These kinds of machines work correctly at a short time and assure persons about their advantages. Furthermore, people find free time to concentrate on other mains work that have.
In conclusion, using technologies make contribution to do work with higher productivity at a right time with lowest cost. They provide people with significant opportunity to devote their time on developing their truly strong individuals.
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Sentence: In conclusion, using technologies make contribution to do work with higher productivity at a right time with lowest cost.
Description: The fragment technologies make contribution is rare
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The essay in out of topic. There are relations between 'luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life' and technologies, but you are not asked to talk about technologies in the first, second and third paragraphs.
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