As understood, children with lack of outdoor activities is classified as a problem which should not be neglected by all people. Whilst, less outdoor leisure time brings a lot of negative effects of which lowers children's health. Bearing this in mind, a solution to this would serve the purpose right.
At first, it is in no doubt that sitting indoor for a long time causes negative sides to children's physical state. As they are opted to stay at home enjoying playing video games or watching TV, it is to say that their backbone would soon turn weak with the lack of joint and muscle movements. This causes muscle aches, bone aches and all sorts of pain around the body.
Besides that prolonged staying indoors lessen children's chances on social interaction. In seeing going outside in meeting friends or having gatherings, it goes without missed that children needed to maintain a healthy mindset before there stands any benefits. For all that takes to build up a positive mood to carry on with other tasks, there is a crucial need to get them relaxed in order to help them stay healthy all along.
With all the possible solutions to tackle the problem, nothing could be more vital than parental teaching in a wisely manner. In looking from the perspective of a majority of children's immaturity in today's world, parents must take the role to cultivate them not only to learn seizing more time outdoors. More importantly, parental education and advice with children would just be as plausible.
On the whole, I believe that spending more time outdoors is indeed brings more pros. In looking from the side of excess indoor activities would definitely cause harmful effects to our body. Parents plays a vital role in nurture children with the importance of outdoor entertainment.
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I believe that todays…
I believe that todays generation is being lethargic they want to spend their in indoor activities and even not bothered about the outdoor activities besides this they can have a huge affect on their health.
First of all children should go to parks daily they should play atleast for two hours. My aunts son never gone to park in his whole life he only use to watch television twenty four hours. This affected him too much that now he is blind as a bat and even though he is least interested in schools curriculum activities he never participates in races competitions and programs .
On the flip side children have to face alot problems of this if they are physically mentally and emotionally are not stable than they are weak from the other class mates. Its best go to park daily play badminton cricket and basketball which always keep you exuberant and motivated and cildren will also feel healthy.
Overall playing daily should be a routine of childrens life and if they dont play outdoor then i think parents should force them otherwise they are become obese sitting in front of television and eating snacks all day.
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Suggestion: to seize
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, look, so, no doubt, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95348837209 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50487763817 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598006644518 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9948945427 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46666666667 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29641454114 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940389581229 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600832896796 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159927865067 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639924916592 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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