writing a letter to building manager regarding a problem parking your bicycle.
when you started to use a bicycle to go to work
what is the problem
suggest solution
Dear Mr. John,
I am Kiya from flat 6-A of your building. I am writing this letter regarding a problem, I faced every day and that is the unavailability of bicycle parking.
As you probably know, I am an environmental activist, as a result, it is preferable for me to use a bicycle instead of a car to reduce pollution. Thus, I have started using my bike for past six months in the way of my office.
However, inadequate parking space makes the situation difficult. Initially, my neighbor was kind enough to let me park under his apartment, but recently he moved out. Moreover, I do not know anyone besides him to help me.
For such reason, I highly recommended, to provide me a parking slot and it would be beneficial if you could do so. Besides the garden, to the left, there is a free space available. What is more, it would be a great use of this place, if it would turn into a bicycle stand.
I am eagerly waiting to hear from you soon. Hope you could consider my situation and take an appropriate action.
yours sincerely,
Kiya
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
...tion and take an appropriate action. yours sincerely, Kiya
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, thus, as a result, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52879581152 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72192905536 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649214659686 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0086896486 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.5384615385 76.5299724578 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6923076923 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38461538462 4.34317383033 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191803775514 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600122070322 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500932392976 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0960680449437 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521570553092 0.0580467560999 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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