Some people think that cars are a better way of transportation around the city, while others prefer cycling. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Although cars are thought by some as good way to roam around the city, other people believe that cycling would be a better option. In my opinion, I would agree with those who argue that it is better to use a bicycle to get around the city.
On the one hand, it is considered that cars are one of the most time efficient modes of transportation. As people, those, who often reach late in important events, use cars to head their destined places on time. Businessmen, for instance, who travel by airline on every other day, could catch their flight in the nick of time using car to reach the airport.
On the other hand, some people think that it is better if emphasis to transport around the city would be on cycling. Because of the cycling it is possible to curb the contamination of environment from exhaust fumes such carbon dioxide, nitrous oxide. These detrimental gases often emitted from the vehicles that use fossil fuels. Another valid reason why people must use bicycle to move around the city is that while riding cycle, people indirectly provide some physical experience to their body. As a result, it helps them to combat against many widespread illnesses like obesity and keeps people healthy and fit.
In conclusion, while people may vary in their opinions, I believe that people would become more healthy, and also our climate would be less tainted if they prefer cycling as a mode of transportation around the city.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1185.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45506496859 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0491980078 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.727272727 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7272727273 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.09090909091 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308812895912 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112583458925 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112286390284 0.0667982634062 168% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182596649344 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0822776742553 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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