People should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequences.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
This topic raises a controversial issue whether people should undertake risky action only after they have carefully considered its consequenece or not. This issue incresingly important on this age of how pepole should take the risk because of sometime people undermine the rist and take particular step. Indisputably, People should examine particular risk and carefully considered its result and afterthat take the appropriate step.
First of all, I would like to point out that consider the the scenario of second world war, at that time wordl war at pinnacle point and Adolf hitler's next plan will be russian arm force. The russian arm force was a one of the biggest arm force in the world, Hitler know about it and he make the plan accordingly how to defeat russian milatory. Hitler also know that if plan was not sucessful than all his arm force will be dies in the war, so he asked to help from Germany for extra milatory forces and after that war begin and Hitler was won. Consequently it is obvious that the risk shoould be take after carefully considered its consequences.
Furthermore, consider example of PSLV-2 launch in India, it is a space vehicle that launched in 1998. Problem is that if it exhaust not properly started at specific height than may be it was blasted so, indian scietist take appropriate step to reduce this risk and use some specific computer technology that ensure that the all work will be done appropriate. So finally Indian space organization launch this vehicle and launch was sucessful because scientist do not undermine this risk.
Lastly, consider the example of indian government, The Government take the step of demonitization in 2016. government will know about the position when prime-minister declare money will not able to use afterwards, than people will going to bank and atm for exchanges money. So, government already printed out new notes and distributed among all bankes so people easily get the money. If here government know aware of the risk so they already solve this problem before the risk occur.
In Conclusion, The author view hold as perfect. because of today people are more presumptuous and take the risk easily and not think about future, When result will comes then people not able to face this truth. Both the comman sense and personal experience told us that people should consider the outcomes os risk and after take the steps.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: the
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Message: The proper name in singular (Hitler) must be used with a third-person verb: 'knows'.
Suggestion: knows
... biggest arm force in the world, Hitler know about it and he make the plan according...
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Suggestion: makes
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Suggestion: Consequently,
...fter that war begin and Hitler was won. Consequently it is obvious that the risk shoould be ...
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Suggestion:
...is obvious that the risk shoould be take after carefully considered its consequen...
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Message: Did you mean 'exhausts'?
Suggestion: exhausts
...launched in 1998. Problem is that if it exhaust not properly started at specific height...
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Suggestion: maybe
...roperly started at specific height than may be it was blasted so, indian scietist take...
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...ake the step of demonitization in 2016. government will know about the position when prime...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'come'
Suggestion: come
...ot think about future, When result will comes then people not able to face this truth...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'outcomes'' or 'outcome's'?
Suggestion: outcomes'; outcome's
...told us that people should consider the outcomes os risk and after take the steps.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, finally, first, furthermore, if, lastly, may, second, so, then, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.5258426966 72% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 58.6224719101 68% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2002.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 403.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96774193548 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58800011266 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 215.323595506 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503722084367 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 624.6 704.065955056 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4451158781 60.3974514979 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.764705882 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7058823529 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.58823529412 5.21951772744 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 5.13820224719 214% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149638220485 0.243740707755 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622812560964 0.0831039109588 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738609515104 0.0758088955206 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0929916300459 0.150359130593 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0745366816691 0.0667264976115 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 100.480337079 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.8971910112 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.