Some people believe, they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state. Do you agree or disagree.
Money has becomes a vital part of our life. The current time of technological advancement, one of the most pressing concerns is regarding the given topic which asserts that, should individuals keep their earning; not make any contribution as a tax to the state. I completely agree with this statement and shall explore the same from various aspects in the following paragraphs.
First and foremost, some people argue that, paying tax to the government is just wastage of money. They strength their viewpoint by claming that, masses make money by doing lots of hard work, and then they become eligible to pay tax to the government. But they do not receive any positive outcome, yet. Government facilities mostly do not help them, when they are in any problem. The best epitome of this is that, 'Hindustan Times' published an article of their survey; facility provided in the hospital and schools are worst. Due to this, most of the financially poor citizens have to go Private hospital for medical help, and pay to private Educational Institute for their children's education as well. So, they do not have any benefit of paying tax.
Moving further, they also claim that, if taxes make any contribution in the development of country; why india does not count as developed countries, such as Canada and america. Moreover, the population of Canada is just around 3.56 crore, where as, India has 132.5 crore of world's population. So, government of india, should get more money from tax. But, still there is a huge difference in the development of these countries. while, india should have most developed country. The best example to proving this explanation is that, 'World Bank bureau' conduted a survey and found that, about 70% of Indians, living under the poverty line. They do not have neccessary requirements to living: food, shelter and cloth.
Thus, it can be ascertain that it is a debatable issue.
Although, I believe that people who earn more than a predefined amount of money have to pay tax, and not for those who earn less than that amount. So, government should not force any poor person to pay tax. Moreover, government should take some strict action to overcome the poverty rate, in which more than half of the Indians are living.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, regarding, so, still, then, thus, well, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 7.30460921844 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1870.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92105263158 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56130377119 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565789473684 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 574.2 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1027154694 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0476190476 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0952380952 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.09523809524 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.350258102516 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101688480248 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819754554842 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154998987376 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0919418594451 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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