You should spend about 20 minutes on this task
You should write at least 150 words
Write a letter for railway manager because of the losing your item which contains some in the train.
- describe the item,
- explain how you lost,
What do you want him to do
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to inform you that I have left my iPad in the train while traveling from London to Nottingham.
This iPad was gifted to me by my brother-in-law on my anniversary last month. Of course the iPad is apple make but it is latest model, that is, AP50 having 8 inches of display and of orange shade which is quite distinguished. Initially my seat was confirmed in the AC-3rd so I occupied my seat at London central station. Since I was going for client meeting and presentation, I commenced the presentation in iPad without wasting anytime. After 30 minutes, train staff confirmed that my ticket got upgraded to AC-1 compartment owing to last minute cancelations and therefore, being a loyal customer, upgrade was done and no money was charged. Following the request, I shifted to new seat and continued my journey to Nottingham in 1st AC compartment.
On reaching, I rushed to meeting which was half an hour drive from station. While in the meeting, I did not find an iPad and realized that it has been left either in taxi or train. I immediately called to taxi driver and he declined to have seen the iPad with me.
I request you to instruct the lost and found department to find out the iPad. I may be contacted at 9811275660 for any further information.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Chama
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to inform you t...
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Line 3, column 118, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the latest'.
Suggestion: is the latest
...Of course the iPad is apple make but it is latest model, that is, AP50 having 8 inches of...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 78, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... found department to find out the iPad. I may be contacted at 9811275660 for any ...
^
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...811275660 for any further information. I am looking forward to hearing from you....
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, therefore, while, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1126.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 241.0 206.0 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67219917012 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80186549165 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626556016598 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 339.3 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.057106622 44.8134815571 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.4285714286 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2142857143 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64285714286 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109686545104 0.216113520407 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423457537003 0.0766984524023 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413138566162 0.0603063233224 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0846418545826 0.12726935374 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481495761143 0.0580467560999 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 8.37731958763 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.