Many people believe that social networking sites have had had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?
Though social networking sites made the communication easy for people and society as well, some people believe that it comes with huge cost in personal and social life. I think that interaction using the social networking sites offers lots of advantages but sensible approach is required to avoid its impact.
People who believe that networking sites brings problems have valid rationales. Firstly, it cause disruption in life, particularly in personal life as people get diverted towards these sites and waste so much time in making comments and responding. For example, my sister who studies in university spends at least two hour to upload the photos and comments on others note. Secondly, medical expert recently revealed that use of these sites creates anxiousness in personal and sometimes people feel stress attack. Therefore, it is advised to not to use these sites in excess.
On the flipside, it provides the opportunity to connect with the world and open the numerous channels for interaction. Nowadays, social websites have become so popular that it is used for variety of purposes such as social connection, jobs, announcement, notification etc. Also, in modern age, people do not like to be disconnected and make everybody aware what is going on in their life and surrounding. For instance, famous actress deepika padukone keep on telling about the recent visit and experiences in day to day life and her fans curiously wait for the posts. Furthermore, social website broadcast the information so rapidly and people are made aware in no time. As a result, this tool is used to announce major information like terrorist attack, hurricane, flood etc. and lots of life are saved.
In conclusion, excessive uses of anything cause issues in life and same hold true in use of social networking sites. It Not only provides the medium to connect but also helps in thwarting rumors and creates various opportunities to all sections of society.
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- Children do not respect their parents as much as they did in the past. This behavior is now having a negative impact on society. Discuss 78
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'hour' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'hours'.
Suggestion: hours
...udies in university spends at least two hour to upload the photos and comments on ot...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, at least, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14465408805 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75490364377 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591194968553 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9537135864 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.25 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.875 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192935427733 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636699759177 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660902840423 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124921813454 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066788705953 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.