You want to apply for following job. Write a letter to Mr Moore describing your previous experience and explaining why you would be suitable for the job. Waiter/waitress required for evening work. Some experience would be necessary.
Respected Mr Moore,
I want to apply for the job of waiter at your prestigious hotel in accordance with the job opportunity you posted on the hotel notice board.
I think I am perfect candidate for this job because I cover all the requirements that you asked for. For the beginners, I have two year work experience at Grand Hotel, Sydney, where I use to work at evening hours. At times, I worked over time.
My job included catering the needs of customers which included tourists as well. It also covered the prime requirement of ways to to present dishes and deserts, correct pronunciation of the dishes, seizing the moment of having to explain the make of an exquisite dish. I also know how to handle bon-china dinnerware.
I was a barista for one complete year so in case if someone wants a hot cup of evening coffee or a brew, I can easily handle that.
In short, my expertise as a barista accompanied with my experience and fluency in English and French makes me most suitable for this job.
Yours obedient
Rick.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 20, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Respected Mr Moore, I want to apply for the job of waiter at...
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...erience at Grand Hotel, Sydney, where I use to work at evening hours. At times, I ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... use to work at evening hours. At times, I worked over time. My job included ca...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
...o covered the prime requirement of ways to to present dishes and deserts, correct pro...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... suitable for this job. Yours obedient Rick.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, i think, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60655737705 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66077015378 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661202185792 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9283477921 44.8134815571 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.3 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 4.34317383033 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322201532523 0.216113520407 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105620217732 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0878532012684 0.0603063233224 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140959336904 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.088117227918 0.0580467560999 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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