You want to apply for the following job. Write a letter to Mrs. Keller describing your previous experience and explaining why you would be suitable for the job.
Advertisement: House Keeper required for a private home. Experience is necessary. Contact Mrs. D. Keller.
Dear Mrs. Keller,
I would like to apply for the position of ‘’ House keeper’’ advertised in the newspaper on the 26th of June 2018.
I am a house keeper with more than nine years of experience in housekeeping field. I was graduated in Hotel and tourism faculty from Alorman University 2009. Ever since, I was employed in different houses and luxurious hotels. At present, I am employed as a room service employee by Sonesta Hotel. My skills include babysitting, cleaning and preparing food. In course of my current job I am responsible for cleaning and preparing over twenty rooms for hotel’s guest. I am used to working at a fast pace to meet guest’s check in time.
I believe the position you offer will give me opportunity to practice all duties that I am passionate about. If you find my skills and experience suitable, please contact me to schedule an interview.
Finally, a latest copy of my resume is attached to the letter. Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours Sincerely,
MEME
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 85, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s of experience in housekeeping field. I was graduated in Hotel and tourism facu...
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Line 9, column 10, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...e to schedule an interview. Finally, a latest copy of my resume is attached to...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 874.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 174.0 206.0 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02298850575 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09959317819 2.54303337028 122% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.67816091954 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0644646971 44.8134815571 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.2307692308 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3846153846 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.15384615385 4.34317383033 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231014779023 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712853146647 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687673220508 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122151876044 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274976768651 0.0580467560999 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.24 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.