Most people believe that stricter punishment should be given for traffic offences. To what extent do you agree?
Many people go with the opinion of increasing traffic offences punishment. I strongly recommend the idea if increasing fines to offences and imprisonment for others.
Increase of fine rates will help to mitigate traffic offences. This is because high rates will force drivers to obey rules so they can avoid paying a substantial amount of money. For instance, citizens will respect parking rules, so that they don't get a ticket for improper parking or parking their car in places that are not specified for the type of their vehicles. However, with no law abiding people driving, road will be in an immense chaos.
Moreover, some traffic felonies should be resolved with imprisonment. The reason behind this, is the increase of accident rates during the last years, accompanied with high death rates. For example, driving against the traffic directions or while under alcoholic substance effect, could lead to a catastrophic results. Hence, imprisonment would be a suitable punishment for such behavior, as it will make the diver think twice before committing any despicable crimes and putting the life of other people in danger.
To summaries, had it not been for strong and strict traffic rules, more and more felony would had been committed. A lot of people and myself believe in the idea of increasing punishment, could help to reduce traffic offences and accidents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ill respect parking rules, so that they dont get a ticket for improper parking or pa...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'result'?
Suggestion: result
...ce effect, could lead to a catastrophic results. Hence, imprisonment would be a suitabl...
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Line 7, column 95, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...affic rules, more and more felony would had been committed. A lot of people and mys...
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Line 7, column 241, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... reduce traffic offences and accidents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1157.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 223.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18834080717 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66682334462 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627802690583 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 351.9 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5070275174 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4166666667 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5833333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198883871732 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736073156414 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426081261747 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117226085038 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266776054949 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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