The three pie charts show below the changes in annual spending by particular UK school in 1981,1991 and2001.
The given pictorial charts reveal the information about variation in annual expenditure by British school during the 1981, 1991 to after 10 years in the 2001. The data is calibrated in percentum. It is clear and coherent representation.
Overall it is evident that, the most significantl spent money maximum in the teacher payments by three pie chart. Which is far ahead of other terms. While, was spent minimum on the insurance.
As obviously seen from, the pie chart data in the year 1981. It obeserved that, the united kingdom school was spent amount of four - fifth of total cost for teacher salaries. Moreover, resources and furniture equipment were spent money 15 percentum respectively. Further more, the least amount expenditure an insurance just under two percentum. In addition to this, the amount of 26 percentum was being spent for other worker salaries.
On the other hand, in the year 1991 and 2001 the teacher salaries were being expenditure cost of upsurged 45% and 50% proportion are respectively. Apart from that, insurance had inclined 3% in the year 1991and 2001 upsuged spent cost to peak 8 %. As manifested, in the circular chart, a significant difference in the school expenditure money can be observed in the charts 1991 and 2001; other worker payment and resources both are amount spent was slightly differenced 22 and 20 proportion. As far as considered school spent money on equipment only five percent from the year 1991, as opposed to the year 2001, which spent 23%.
- The chart below gives information about science qualifications held by people in two countries.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
- Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind , such as reading and doing word puzzles. Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time. 73
- In many countries the proportion of older people is steadily increasing. Some think this is good. While other believe this is a problem for a country. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
- The chart give information about rates of smoking in men and women from year 1960 to 2000. 73
- Some people think that it is better for boys and girls to get study in separate schools. Other, however, think that it is better for them to study in mixed school. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, while, apart from, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 3.97073170732 327% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1257.0 965.302439024 130% => OK
No of words: 248.0 196.424390244 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0685483871 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73262072011 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552419354839 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 283.868780488 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.9890494149 43.030603864 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5333333333 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46666666667 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141231231706 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0485517473677 0.103423049105 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0650828591799 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101336758762 0.15604864568 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035528671844 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 11.4329268293 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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