In many country women no longer feel the need to get married.some people believe that this because women were own income and do not required security from man a bring. What extent to you agree or disagree with the statement.
With the in modernization .a man transferred his life tremendously. he has progressed from walking a barefooted in the jungle to take first step on moon.nevertheless, there are some issues . Which is irrevocable an complex as ever for instance.this topic asserts that getting married ; necessary or not ? Through this essay . I shall explore my point of view into following paragraphs. It is clear and coherent representation. I completely agree to this statement.
To begin with, the marriage is a combination of two souls .however , their are some issues develop about marriage.moreover, the women are well educated at present time that is the reason they not think about married division.afterthat, educated level of women incline dramatically from past. Futhermore , education either of women more educated or nation also develop.whereas, for example, a survey conducted my California university about married issues of women that women more education point of views they earn more than man besides , their not any requirement of security to men. However , women has more stronger point about education that is why this survey conducted about awareness to this issue.
Secondly, their responsible also increased by marriage as well as, this main issues of not getting marriage. However, through marriage responsible also more than single life about laws family that is house and other responsiblity . afterthat, this reason women also more comfortable unmarried life . regarding , for example , house responsiblity like they have so many burden of house hold work and some other personal exertion also obtained about this issue . However, responsiblity mostly develop many type of issues like burden, depression . So all this issues about discussion also take place in this survey.
In summary, there is no single answer of this question still, I shall explore my point of into on paragraphs that women also more educated than men and therefore their are no requirement of married about issues . however, they handle all situation more comfortably as well as men. Moreover, they handling our family responsiblity like men.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, regarding, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, whereas, for example, for instance, in summary, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1788.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43465045593 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15562200578 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522796352584 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 5.43587174349 239% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 77.0032916518 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1052631579 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3157894737 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.94736842105 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 40.0 5.01903807615 797% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153409656916 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0542594238985 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0478080353924 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988603485235 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255802110538 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.89 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.