The there pie charts below show the change in annual spending by a particular UK school in 1981,1991,2001.
The given circular layout depict the information about the school in UK by changes spending about annual into 1981,1991 and 2001 country through this essay .it is clear and coherent representation.
On one side, the data is calibrated of total school spending into per centum. In step first, the data of school to workers salaries, resource furniture , equipment was 28%, 15%, 15% into 1981 countury.beside , in 1991 countury the data of other workers salaries, resource, furniture and equipment were 22%, 58%, 20% respectively.
On other side, the data of school spending into 2001 differ from other . However, in they had worked salaries, resource, furniture and equipment of data 9%, 15% , 23% respectively. Moreover, they had been all the of data account only for one school . from 1981 , 1991 and 2001.
Overall, it is the evident, that there is no single answer to this question nevertheless, weighing will the both use of hand at the end that in all the countury the data were either maximum of teacher salaries or minimum of insurance as well as , about according of sales in per centum.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 32.9175257732 24% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76993096786 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 1.44329896907 485% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.0361038695 44.8134815571 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 113.75 76.5299724578 149% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 4.34317383033 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 2.54639175258 511% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207376318213 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114693936519 0.0766984524023 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107085396398 0.0603063233224 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135573097842 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103477415311 0.0580467560999 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 8.37731958763 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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