In some countries, children are becoming overweight and unhealthy. What are the cause and solution for this?
These days, in many nations, children have to face obesity disease at on alarm rate. While this phenomenon has become increasingly serious; there are numerous of reasons and solutions for this.
The primary cause of this trend is the advancement of technology. With science cutting-eggs, the adolescents have chances to approach high-tech devices such as iPhone, iPad that have become their essential life. They prefer playing computer game or chatting on internet with their friends rather than playing out of door sports or enjoy physical activities. As a result, they have sedentary lifestyle and out of control their weight. Moreover, the fast pace of modern life is also main reason that makes children weight increase significantly. Due to hectic schedule, almost parents do not time to cook meal in family frequently. The junk food and sugary soft drink which contain ingredients that are high in calorie ,cholesterol and fat, have been the trendy choice for kids. Furthermore, with popularity fast food industry, they tend to be attracted by its ads and ask their parents satisfy.
There are several actions that governments, parents and schools could take to prevent the trend that is describes above. Firstly, governments should regulate the fast food industry by limiting the amounts of harmful ingredients they use in junk foods and also by imposing sweeping taxes on them to discourage them from spreading. Secondly, in the school, beside academic study, primary students should be held more and more outdoor activities regularly. For example, swimming skill training or marathon competition. Finally, parents need to keep an eye on their children's eating habit simultaneous try to encourage their children to eat home cooked foods because they are healthier
To conclude, childhood obesity is increasing alarmingly and this could complicate their lives in the future. However, various measurements can be taking some preventive actions as described above.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: out-of-door
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Suggestion:
...food and sugary soft drink which contain ingredients that are high in calorie ,ch...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, while, for example, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1667.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.41233766234 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74040399386 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.655844155844 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.6433535026 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.1875 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0625 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142003102798 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476557561061 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693199237371 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103183599665 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0718173824398 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.5 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.