No one can deny the role of parents as our first teachers. Parents teach children from the very basic stuff to the attitude they should take in life. Their actions and emotions deepen in the children's instincts. we can call parents "the best teachers" in the world, it is not far from reality. What parents teach children somehow shape the children's characteristics. And their pure love makes their teaching crucially effective, also what people learn in their childhood is so deeper.
Parents can be the best teachers. There is two crucial factor that enables parents to teach well. Parents love their children and this is the reason that helps them easily sacrifice their time and energy for their children. Moreover, it makes children flexible and open to learn better. In addition to love, parents start teaching children very soon, Therefore everything children learn from parents goes deep with them.
Parents shape their children personality. What parents teach is totally different from what is taught in schools. parents shape their children minds. Moreover, this is something that children learn by watching their parents actions. A simple example is telling children the importance of honesty, while they see their parents sometimes lie, hence they will learn to lie too. Parents need to be moral in order to raise moral children.
To conclude, there are two criteria that cause someone to be known as the best teacher, their ability to teach well and their Knowlege. Indisputably, parents are very much capable to teach well. In the case of parents knowledge more refers to ethical issues, they can instill humanity, in fact, they can teach their children to be a good person. And this depends on how much they are good themselves.
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Suggestion: to better; to well
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, while, in addition, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 288.0 407.700716846 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14236111111 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48269230712 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 212.727598566 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510416666667 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 618.680645161 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.8282625743 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.5238095238 100.406767564 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7142857143 20.6045352989 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2380952381 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.88709677419 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151917885056 0.236089414692 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724392569162 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071403230514 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116422566692 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305906059978 0.0645574589148 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 11.7677419355 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 58.1214874552 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.1575268817 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.94 10.9000537634 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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