After being involved in an accident, you were looked after by a person you did not know before. Write a special thank you letter to express your gratitude.
In your letter:
Introduce yourself and let him/her know why you are writing
Express your appreciation
And offer him/ her to visit your home with this family.
Dear Sam,
Hope this letter finds you in good health. I am Jack, whom you saved from a fatal accident 2 weeks earlier. My car broke down in the middle of road and a truck hit my car from front. I lost conscious right away and was taken to the hospital by you. My right shoulder was badly fractured. I was admitted in hospital for a week's time and i cannot thank you enough for the way you have taken care of me during that time. Despite of not knowing my name even you took care of me like your own brother. I cannot express my gratitude through words. You have shown tremendous act of humanity that i am extremely grateful for. My belief has gotten firm that world is still full of excellent human beings like you.
I would not be able to repay you for the kind act you did, but i would like to extend our relationship further. I would be really glad if you and your family could join us for dinner coming Saturday. My family is very eager to see my life savior.I look forward to your positive response and will be glad to be your host.
Looking to hear from you soon.
Your Sincerely,
Jack
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sam, Hope this letter finds you in good healt...
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...mitted in hospital for a weeks time and i cannot thank you enough for the way you...
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...e shown tremendous act of humanity that i am extremely grateful for. My belief ha...
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...repay you for the kind act you did, but i would like to extend our relationship f...
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...ily is very eager to see my life savior.I look forward to your positive response ...
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... to hear from you soon. Your Sincerely, Jack
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...r from you soon. Your Sincerely, Jack
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.20379146919 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13505925482 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611374407583 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7510433427 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.1333333333 76.5299724578 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0666666667 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.13333333333 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316532961989 0.216113520407 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112080358519 0.0766984524023 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600949151418 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217441360249 0.12726935374 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295152035069 0.0580467560999 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.4 8.37731958763 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.49 8.71597938144 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.35 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.