The picture reveals the process of chocolate production. It consists of 10 steps from raw materials up to end product.
Initially, cocoa is planted and grown abundantly in America, Africa, and Indonesia and when it grows, it produces ripe red pods. These pods are then collected for harvesting and white cocoa beans are extracted from the center of each pod. The white beans, afterwards, are then fermented in a rectangular basin where it is spread and left under the sun for drying purposes. Next, the dried beans are then put in sacks and are stacked for transportation via train or trucks and are delivered to factories.
The beans are then roasted in factory chambers in high temperature, 350 degrees celcius. Subsequently, they are put in crushing machine and their outer shells are removed and separated from the roasted beans. Lastly, the crushed product is then pressed by 2 rollers until liquid chocolate is produced.
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I dont know what is happening
I dont know what is happening with the e grader but whenever i use my cp to submit essays, the grade is always 11.23 blah blah....
But when i type it using my laptop, it is ok. Nd grade is above 50 plus or so...
It is not your problem but e
It is not your problem but e-grade. When the topic is short or doesn't have enough key words to related to the content, the e-grader may give a wrong message like: 'It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.', but the essay is actually well developed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 86, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...production. It consists of 10 steps from raw materials up to end product. Init...
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Line 5, column 256, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., the crushed product is then pressed by 2 rollers until liquid chocolate is prod...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
lastly, then, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 783.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 154.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08441558442 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52273666998 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69298953072 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662337662338 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1938627789 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1111111111 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0600276587516 0.215688989381 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0311901333947 0.103423049105 30% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598269779246 0.0843802449381 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0489577878919 0.15604864568 31% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0353145438139 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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