You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he / she should get a job.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter
1. say why he / she would not enjoy going to college
2. explain why getting a job is a good idea for him / her
3. suggest types of jobs that would be suitable for him / her
Dear Nithya,
How are you? Hope you and your family members are doing well.I am really glad to help, regards whether you should consider for a job or further studies.
I would recommend you to search for the job after the completion of your final year because if you study continuously without a break, you will find it uninteresting. Moreover, it is good to have exposure outside the college life which will give outstanding experiences. In addition, it is an opportunity to gain move become socialized among the public.
As far as, from my point of view, you can search for the software designer jobs which has a vital growth in future. Also, as you are more fascinated towards computer programming,I would also recommend to apply for software developer opportunities.
All the best for your future. Waiting to hear good news from your end.Hope you will follow my advise.
Yours Truly,
XXX
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 62, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
... and your family members are doing well.I am really glad to help, regards whether...
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Line 4, column 106, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... designer jobs which has a vital growth in future. Also, as you are more fascinated towar...
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Line 4, column 177, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
... fascinated towards computer programming,I would also recommend to apply for softw...
^^
Line 4, column 191, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommend applying'.
Suggestion: recommend applying
...wards computer programming,I would also recommend to apply for software developer opportunities. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Hope
...Waiting to hear good news from your end.Hope you will follow my advise. Yours Truly...
^^^^
Line 5, column 94, Rule ID: GIVE_ADVISE[3]
Message: Did you mean 'advice' (a noun)?
Suggestion: advice
...s from your end.Hope you will follow my advise. Yours Truly, XXX
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, really, so, well, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 749.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 152.0 206.0 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92763157895 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71070994524 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.697368421053 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1720449036 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.9 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223924531487 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083462701233 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0558654423553 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139659267363 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323807634725 0.0580467560999 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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