Today younger people do not take interest in teaching profession, what are reson behind this and how to improve this.
"Teaching is an art, every one can not learn this art". With the modernisation of the world life style of person have properly affected. Today topic asserts that why yougest dislike teaching profession? I shall explore my point of view in below paragraph.
Firstly, with the development of World, everyone have need to a facilities of life, for that also have needed to more money as well as, people want to burden less life. But in teaching they neither get good payment nor burden free life. Government never give them proper payments, and also take a Much burden of school work. Moreover, people who think to join this profession, leave his decision.
For solve this problem government would be make policies. Increase salary of government employees. Secondly should be reduce work load of extra school work such as management work, polio duties and election duties etcetera.Mainly provide guidelines about new policies and job structure.
Overall, it totally depend upon interest of people, and interest can develop by the facilities of job which government provide to employees.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a facility' or simply 'facilities'?
Suggestion: a facility; facilities
...lopment of World, everyone have need to a facilities of life, for that also have needed to m...
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Line 3, column 296, Rule ID: A_MUCH_NN1[1]
Message: Maybe you should omit the article "a", leaving only 'much'.
Suggestion: much
...ive them proper payments, and also take a Much burden of school work. Moreover, people...
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Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'reduced'?
Suggestion: reduced
...overnment employees. Secondly should be reduce work load of extra school work such as ...
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Line 5, column 224, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Mainly
...lio duties and election duties etcetera.Mainly provide guidelines about new policies a...
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Line 7, column 21, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'depends'?
Suggestion: depends
... job structure. Overall, it totally depend upon interest of people, and interest c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 927.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 176.0 315.596192385 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26704545455 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75520145766 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.727272727273 0.561755894193 129% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 506.74238477 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.8938237191 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.25 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155243954621 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534930783754 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0548570300756 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0820409542584 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0328840059387 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.69 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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