Education is the vital tool for increase successfully each social and country. Unfortunately, the education system of my country, Iran is more degree orientation instead of job orientation. I would like to illustrate some drawbacks and recommend a few solutions for meliorate.
In my opinion first, theoretical education change to practical education. I mean the government should be created the new role for educational systems and force them that improve the skill of their student instead of the theoretical knowledge.
Second I strongly believe teaching English should start at the elementary schools because English is International and since language so there are lots of advantage of English.
In the end, I would suggest that education must be free for all children. However, people living in the poor region are spending their whole day in arranging only some basic needs. The government need to bring education awareness equally in every area for better growth and development throughout the country.
In conclusion, Education is the most important factor, which plays a great role in the development of an individual as well as a country. Without education, life becomes aimless. A good education system must have common goals in every area of the country to provide to suitable and proper learning to its citizens.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: Naveena Gill
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, so, well, i mean, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1124.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32701421801 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93984064414 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635071090047 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5413812775 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5833333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302554792323 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102675960862 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736064282992 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150135682195 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0845712965349 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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