Some people think that zoos are all cruel and should be closed down. Others however believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals.
Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion.
Some people say zoos are the places where wild life animals can be protected and take care properly, whilst other group argues that locking up animals’ freedom in zoo cages is cruel. In my opinion, there are zoos which are non-profitable and the principal purpose is to take better care of wild species that are going to extinct.
There might be two reasons for people to think zoos are inhumane. One might be the zoos are limiting the freedom of animals by jailing them instead of letting them wander free in forests and let them lead their natural life. Another reason could be animals are not being properly treated in zoos. For instance, some zoos train animals so hard to entertain visitors just for getting money out of them. This may lead severe physical strain and illness to animals which inevitably cause less life span of them.Abolishing zoos is the suggested solution by this group keeping above reasons in mind.
However, zoos are meant to protect wild life species to save for future generation. After-all they have right to live along with human beings. Many non profitable zoos execute plans to save wild life by sending teams across forests to fetch for species that are going extinct and taken them to zoo to provide proper nurturing. As zoos can be the only place to do this kind of actions, closing zoos will effect to implement these plans . For instance blue cross is animal care organisation joined hands with many zoos to save to be extinct species by providing them suitable environment to live.
All in all, although some people think Zoos are cruel, I firmly believe there are many non profitable zoos running whose solely intention is to save and protect wild life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 144, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'animals'' or 'animal's'?
Suggestion: animals'; animal's
...ilst other group argues that locking up animals freedom in zoo cages is cruel. In my op...
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Line 5, column 85, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... species to save for future generation. After all they have right to live along with ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, after all, for instance, kind of, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1279.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71955719557 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14606023747 2.80592935109 76% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546125461255 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3933558372 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3846153846 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.30769230769 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310847125852 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127843649599 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842891700905 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.224151038595 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636066624002 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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