An old friendis coming to town and has invited you to go to the cinema. Write to your friend. In your letter
Explain that you are unable to come
Find out how long your friend is stayingin town
Arrange a suitable time to meet
Dear Jane,
I hope this letter finds you well. I was so happy when I was heard you are coming to Newyork next week. Sorry I didn't write to you earlier, because I'm so busy with my work these days and I have to stay at the office until after midnight every night because of the new project I'd before said about that to you. And thank you for your kind invitation to the cinema next Monday. I'd love to accept your invitation, but unfortunately, I'm going to present some details of the project at an important meeting next Monday.
I really want to know how long you decide to stay in Newyork because I would really like to catch up with you as soon as possible. I will be free next Wednesday. So, It will be great for going to the cinema on Wednesday if possible for you.
Listen! I have a good plan. As you know next Friday will be my birthday. If you can stay here until next Friday, I will hold a small birthday party with some of our high school friends. It will be unforgettable as we will meet each other after several years. Please, let me know about your plan for next Friday.
I hope to see you soon.
All the best,
Sarah Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...re coming to Newyork next week. Sorry I didnt write to you earlier, because Im so bus...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...y I didnt write to you earlier, because Im so busy with my work these days and I h...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
... every night because of the new project Id before said about that to you. And than...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...d invitation to the cinema next Monday. Id love to accept your invitation, but unf...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...ept your invitation, but unfortunately, Im going to present some details of the pr...
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Line 7, column 29, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...for you. Listen! I have a good plan. As you know next Friday will be my birthda...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, really, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 935.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.25 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17127661728 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595454545455 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5912178605 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.3333333333 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6666666667 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21562909228 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.07451470564 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061497018494 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131744233589 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0555359663282 0.0580467560999 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 8.37731958763 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.78 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.62 7.59969072165 74% => OK
difficult_words: 18.0 41.2886597938 44% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.