Write a letter to a college Principal, where you attended a one day computer course and are unhappy about the way it was conducted. Explain what was the type of the course, what happened and what can be done to make sure this problem never occurs again.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am Gowthami, a final year student of Electronics and Communication department from N.B.K.R Institute of science and technology. This is to write about my unhappy experience with IEEE SAP programming one day course organized by your college which was held on last Saturday.
I was sent to this program by our department head along with a group of other students expecting this course would eventually help us in our final year project. But it was all unsatisfactory, as we faced few problems on the day. Firstly, the registration process was manual, which made us to wait till 10:00AM in queues. Secondly, instead of SAP, basics of coding was taught for more than half a day. Lastly, there was a power cut for one hour in the evening. Therefore, we had only 3 to four hours of SAP training which was actually claimed as full day session which made us to lose an important day in our project cycle.
I would suggest you to please have proper plan of organizing such events. For instance, online registration would possibly save time, and I wonder how power backup was not maintained when organizing this kind of events. Lastly, it would be better if separate classes are organized for beginners who may need basics which would not impact actual course aspirants.
Yours faithfully,
Gowthami
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 92, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: R
...and Communication department from N.B.K.R Institute of science and technology. Th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, therefore, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1095.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 223.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91031390135 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86434787811 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73887160777 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663677130045 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7042752119 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.25 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5833333333 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 4.34317383033 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175768397497 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671872525959 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550725996167 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122527476893 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0443833916776 0.0580467560999 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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