The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit

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The charts below give information about travel to and from the UK and about the most popular countries for UK residents to visit

The given charts depict the number of visitors travel to and from the UK. As well as, the countries preferred by residents of UK to visit.
At a glance, it is observed that striking factor being the trend of overall enhancement. In 1979, approximately 10 Millions of Residents visit to UK. Whereas, about 12 millions of UK residents visit to abroad. In following years, rises is measured in both cases after year of 1985. The number of visitor from UK to abroad gain Momentum from 1986 and followed by gradually rise whereas visitors to UK also gain Momentum but at less rate compared to visit abroad from UK. In starting year, difference between both is only about 2 millions. Whereas, after 20 years more difference is measured and it is about 25 Millions. The bar graph depict the UK resident give preference to France and Spain with numbering of about 11 millions and 9 millions respectively. On other hand, less preferred country of UK residents is turkey.
In the nutshell, British gain momentum of visit abroad within 20 year and the France is the favourite country of UK residents.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 112, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '10 million'.
Suggestion: 10 million
...all enhancement. In 1979, approximately 10 Millions of Residents visit to UK. Whereas, about 1...
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Line 2, column 150, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...y 10 Millions of Residents visit to UK. Whereas, about 12 millions of UK residents visi...
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Line 2, column 165, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '12 million'.
Suggestion: 12 million
...f Residents visit to UK. Whereas, about 12 millions of UK residents visit to abroad. In follow...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, whereas, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 33.7804878049 124% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 903.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77777777778 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66944719403 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529100529101 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0883475911 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.25 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 22.9334400587 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40474520772 0.215688989381 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.162684552877 0.103423049105 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.099179496397 0.0843802449381 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.286454759669 0.15604864568 184% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.105245970873 0.0819641961636 128% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.2329268293 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 61.2550243902 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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