A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
request advise about a gift for his/her family
ask about activities and clothing in his/her country
find out about the food
Write at least 150 words.
Dear Sam,
Hope this letter finds you hale and hearty. I received your letter yesterday in which you have invited me to visit your place in Toronto, Canada. I am very delighted to tell you that I was already planning to spend my vacations in Canada and I am so grateful that you have invited me. It's such a relief that you know some people at the place you are going for the first time.
I shall be travelling from Pakistan on 15th July, 2018. My visit at your place will be of 7 days. Since I am coming in your country for the first time, I would like you to share some useful details with me which will help me travel in more organized way.
Please be very open about it, what gift do you suggest to bring for you and your family. Furthermore, what sort of clothing you think would be best according to current weather. I have heard much about Niagara falls and would love to visit that place. I am sure there would be other breathtaking places like this in your country where you would take me to.
You know I am a food lover, last but not the least; what are the top best food options available that can satisfy my taste buds.I am pretty much excited about my trip and have started preparing 2 weeks earlier from flight day.I am looking forward to read from you soon.
Your Sincerely,
Jack
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sam, Hope this letter finds you hale and hear...
^^^
Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'July 2018'.
Suggestion: July 2018
...all be travelling from Pakistan on 15th July, 2018. My visit at your place will be of 7 da...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 48, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest bringing'.
Suggestion: suggest bringing
...be very open about it, what gift do you suggest to bring for you and your family. Furthermore, w...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...vailable that can satisfy my taste buds.I am pretty much excited about my trip an...
^
Line 5, column 227, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...eparing 2 weeks earlier from flight day.I am looking forward to read from you soo...
^
Line 5, column 248, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to reading'.
Suggestion: to reading
...er from flight day.I am looking forward to read from you soon. Your Sincerely, Jack ...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to read from you soon. Your Sincerely, Jack
^^^
Line 7, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d from you soon. Your Sincerely, Jack
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, look, so, sort of, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 50.0 32.9175257732 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1057.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 246.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29674796748 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09028880556 2.54303337028 82% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577235772358 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6751950136 44.8134815571 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3076923077 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9230769231 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.29007158669 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120958975589 0.0766984524023 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700905507565 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1827066127 0.12726935374 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874361384006 0.0580467560999 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.